I was writing a recount of what I did on the holiday.
On the holidays I went ice skating. I went With my brother Callum, Lachlan and my brothers friend Rilie. My mum did not ice skate. We ice skated for two hours 12:00 to 2:00. It was fun I learn’t how to ice skate. Ice skating was fun. Then we dropped my brother and Rilie off at the shops and went home.
Something I would do different next time is I will try and not have any red lines.
I think I would break my leg if I went ice-skating! Where did you go to do this? I am pleased that you enjoyed it and had fun :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah Kayla here from Kaniere school.I like your photos because they are from the fashion sport. I have gone there once and it is so cool.I like the way you put in blue words because the ground is blue. How many times did you go ice skating??
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah my name is Preston and I'm from Kaniere School I like your photos because it's a really cool sport.I want to go there one day.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah, Mariah here from Kaniere. I like your photos and the font is a good one because they look super super cool and easy to read. I like ice skating and when we go to camp we get to go ice skating. Is it hard ice skating?? I Hope you had a great time ice skating.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah, your recount of your holiday is written well. It sounds like you and your brothers (and the friend) had a great time ice skating! It is a great activity to do for family time and I think we should do it more. Glad you enjoyed your holiday cheers Magriet
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Nevaeh
ReplyDeleteI love that it blows my mind because I love ice skating
Next time but you ice skating and all so make it exciting
maybe read it again there are no caps on mum it is a name though it is fantastic I think it is your best work.