The Marshmallow man-By Keisha and Hannah.
On a dark cold windy night the lake was wavy and then it stopped moving because a green thing popped up from the lake. Jeff then heard a shhhhh top.Then he stood up and said what was that? He was holding on to the stick and he was using the marshmallow as the sharp bit.So then there was a splash!!! In the water.Then the marshmallow man popped out of the lake.Then he saw that it was something green with gold eye’s.When he turned around then he saw a light shining on his head. So then the green thing was looking at him.Then he rolled over and Jeff gave him another marshmallow.Then he giving him marshmallows.Then the marshmallow man wanted more more
And then he was trying to get to get more but he had no more! Then Jeff was screaming AHHHHHH!!Then he quickly got up and ran.After he tripped over a rock.Then he got up and ran away.But he was still screaming all the way back into the middle of the forest that will sink you into the ground.So then he was starting to get tried.After when he was getting tried he suddenly got lost.When he turned around he saw the Marshmallow man was chasing him.Then the marshmallow man was chasing Jeff.After when he stoped hhe started to cry all the way home!
The End.I liked about it that we got to work with buddies and it was easy.How I worked with my buddy-We took turns by doing sentces.
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